This is the final letter I gave Sabine. Enjoy!
Dear colleagues,
When your division reaches 97% participation, each member wins a day off.
ECF Coordinator
IBM Canada,
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Assignment 4 (Second posting)
Dear colleagues,
As the winter winds chill the air, you can feel extra warm this holiday season by making a tax-deductible donation to the United Way during our year end gift matching campaign.
It's a really exciting time to make a gift to the United Way. Until December 31, for every dollar you donate to the United Way we will double it by a matching gift from the Employee Charitable Foundation up to $5000.
The United Way could not sustain a vital network of over 200 health and social service agencies without the support of IBMers. Currently, government support accounts for less than 50 per cent of revenues. The remainder must be made up through the generosity of individual and corporate gifts.
Without your support, the United Way could not finance such important initiatives as the Eglinton Community Health Centre, the Pathways to Education Partnership or the Career Search Portal. Please don't hesitate, make a tax-deductible donation today. Your contribution can go a long way -- a donation of at least two dollars a day, every day, seven days a week, will help us reach this year's goal of $4 million. A payroll deduction form is enclosed to fill out for your convenience. Won't you return you're donation in the self-addressed envelop provided?
Assignment 4 (First posting)
Dear colleagues,
As the winter winds chill the air, you can feel extra warm this holiday season by making a tax-deductible donation to the United Way during our year end gift matching campaign.
It's a really exciting time to make a gift to the United Way. Until December 31, for every dollar you donate to the United Way we will double it by a matching gift from the Employee Charitable Foundation up to $5 000.
The United Way could not **happen** without the support of individuals like you. Currently, government support accounts for less than 50 per cent of revenues. The remainder must be made up through the generosity of the public and private sector.
Without your support, the United Way could not **continue** such important initiatives as the Eglinton Community Health Centre, the Pathways to Education Partnership or the Career Search Portal. Please don't hesitate, make a tax-deductible donation today. Take advantage of the new favourable tax rules and donate shares, or include the United Way in your will. A payroll deduction form is enclosed for you to fill out today.
Contact the Employee Charitable Foundation to learn more about how your support will help guarantee the future of the United Way in Toronto.
1 comment:
Great job, Linda - as usual. :) I like the amount of deatil you have (eg. specific examples of United Way initiatives and the 'how your contribution makes a difference' section). A couple typos I caught: YOUR donation, and envelope (both in the last sentence). Please let me know what you think of mine! :)
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